Monday, October 24, 2011

A burglary of the heart


So the women
showed up
common menace
a potential criminal

Saturday night
the women called
hoping to cultivate relationships
there's no way
pay attention
something looks suspecious
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4 comments:

  1. I like the title it sets the mood for the poem.

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  2. This is so good! I love how you have the link to the picture in the poem. So you click on the words and it goes to the freakin' picture!!!!!!! So creative.

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  3. Somebody hurry and call Thurston!

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  4. Wake up from your dream. I never told you I loved you.

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